Friday, October 05, 2007

My Bear's asleep
He's all tucked in
A blankie pulled
Under his chin

The miles between
His bed and mine
Two thousand plus
A giant line

I miss his warm breath
Sweetly scented,
Fine long hair
With softness hinted

Bear and Raven
Hurry home
I miss you, mine


ariel said...

The miles between his bed and mine, you are the most poetic Raven I have ever met, your singing is sweet.

Tom & Icy said...

And it's so sad.

Tom & Icy said...

The saddest sound is no sound at all from the one you love.

Anonymous said...

True Ariel,she IS the sweetest Raven I know too,No fear Tom & Icy-am sure she can hear my rant and raves over the miles--Morning Sweetie,beautiful rainy day in flor-i-DA--Your tender words have me grinning from ear to ear--may your day start as wonderful as mine--Peace Always Bear

EBEZP said...

That's really lovely Terry

Anonymous said...

Beautifull written.


Miz Nix

Anonymous said...

Very nice indeed. And thanks for visiting my blog. My obsession with Iceland is a niche topic but I knew I'd bump into other folks that understand my dreams. Takk fyrir!

tsduff said...

Ariel - Thank you - and pray tell how many have you met? :) All ravens are poetic - it is their nature although this is not widely known.

Tom and Icy - Sad but yet not sad as I look forward to his homecoming.

Yes, that must be the saddest sound of all... silence from your loved one. You are wise.

Not-so-Annonymous: Such the early riser. Your grin is contagious.

*see the Raven grin* xo

EBEZP: = love is beautiful, isn't it :)

Miz Nix: Hello and welcome from across that big ole pond. You have a nice "family".

Vikingsson: Obsession understood! there is no help for it... it just keeps getting bigger. I'm afraid for you... once you actually set foot on the Land - you might not return. It surpasses anything and everything you've ever heard or seen in pictures. You have a great website by the way. Yes indeed - on with the butter!

TLP said...

So sweet. I love it.

Anonymous said...

Awwwww, would it help thinking about how Bear's snore? Heehee.

Anonymous said...

Nothing lonlier than an empty bed when your best friend is away.
Beautifully written, it expresses the feeling perfectly.

Mo'a said...

Awwwww!!! you have such a way with words. I gather that he is not in Iceland that would be 6000 miles away...that would be just too much to take.

Jamie Dawn said...

That is SO tender & precious!!!
His response is toooo wonderful!!!!!
Who knew ravens & bears were so compatible??
There's lots of love ooozing from this post!

SOe said...

I like this post very much.

actonbell said...

Aw, that's fantastic and cuddly:)

jillie said...

Those is so very well done Terry. It makes me miss him and I don't even know him.

Hope you had a great wknd ;o)

Keshi said...

aww cute one. Hope he'll be back in ur amrs real soon!


tsduff said...

tlp: :) It is simply the truth.

Annonymous: Yes - everything helps. Thinking about his deep beary snoring will help me fall asleep.

TC - Pretty wise for a cat. My best friend's absence is like having cookies with no milk, peanut butter without any jam, or a banana without a peel.

Mo'a - LOL. It WOULD be too much to take - not only his heartfelt absence, but the knowledge that he was in The Land would be un Bearable!

Jamie Dawn:
His response was just a peep into how enormous his heart it. I'm a lucky bird in so many ways, but mostly because this Bear loves me. :)

SOe - reminds me of you and your hubby :)

Actonbell - That Bear cuddles like no other.

Jillie - When he travels, I'm only half here. But I know he'll be back.

tsduff said...

Hey Keshi - We're never too far apart, even though the distance between us is great. (we share that connection whereever we are...) But, it IS so much better to be in his arms :-D

Minka said...

I want that, too! Almost exactly like you sang it.

I am grinning, too!

tsduff said...

Minka - :)

I know they have ravens in Iceland, but you know, the last polar bear was away back when the ice froze up by Husavik somewhere... a long time ago. Not enough berries up there for a bear.

G said...

That is just magical Terry. Love it.