Terry you are so brilliant your posts are just great. I loved the Betty Boop so much I posted it I actually remember that cartoon as a kid....Crows like raisens only you please tell me your going places with you talent of writing.. Now I'm going to read the 3 pigs stuff below..
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Raisins in trees? I thought they were grapes on vines.
maybe silently waiting
IS their voice.
(maybe they're waiting
for raisins...)
"Crows like raisins" is the best phrase of 2009 so far, I think.
dancing silently in the tree,unlike a cali raisin...Blessings XoXo
a perfect description.
i wanna say,
soooooo truuuuu!
Please don't ask about their voices, though. You'll be sorry if they speak up.
hahahaha
weeeeeeeeeeee
4 and 20 blackbirds baked in a (raisin) pie? hehehe, couldn't resist.
Nice picture. Never heard a quiet crow.
That does everything a haiku should. I like the "raisins" simile.
Great Haiku. The whole thing, including the photo, is very evocative.
Crows can be pretty noisy, so I'm glad these ones are silently waiting.
Yummmmm.... raisins!
:-)
I like 'silent' crows..cos thats gentle on my ears :)
Keshi.
I love this very much..
Raisins, like crows, sit
On bran, silently mushing.
Where then is my spoon?
Perfect American Haiku. Love it.
In Michigan sit
crows frozen on branches stiff
no caw for summer
Terry you are so brilliant your posts are just great. I loved the Betty Boop so much I posted it I actually remember that cartoon as a kid....Crows like raisens only you please tell me your going places with you talent of writing.. Now I'm going to read the 3 pigs stuff below..
Fascinating word picture Terry. I like your style.
Geez Terry, I took a photo exactly like that one today.
I love your poem.
this is starting to remind me
of my favourite breakfast cereal:
Raisin Branch
Maybe they are like me, just waiting for someone to listen to what they have to say.
Hi Terry..sent you an email with some of our Alaskan raven's. The scene in your pic is really familiar to me...except ours are much much bigger.
anji
I like your poem with this wonderful image.
With ravens as my spirit animal, I had to stop by an say "Quork" to your "Caw" crows.
Thanks for the poem!
Simply beautiful
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